I made some comments. 
I have some serious problems with two of the things in the statement as it now stands:

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> joy
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> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] NCUC input on new gTLDs and human rights
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> Hi all - following on from the NCUC discussions on this list and at the
> recent meeting in Prague, NCUC agreed to develop a comment on new gTLDs
> and human rights. The open comment period closes on 12 August.
> To start discussion on the comment I've prepared a draft outline of some
> key points that can be developed with inputs from those interested. To
> do so I've created a google doc which anyone can view and comment on by
> clicking the comment link here:
> 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/17ijURQYy1uKh27NyDEWh_V1zhCDCIvVtdzUE
> JLaNmyE/edit
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> You do not need a google account to view and comment on this.
> I will be monitoring the comments periodically and helping NCUC to
> update the comment by the deadline.
> 
> Thanks to those who expressed interest in supporting this initiative.
> 
> Joy
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