Hey Avri I've updated it so that the link is editable instead of comment only.

Your comments look great and given your background in the ATRT that was great catch that I hadn’t even thought of!



-James



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From: NCSG-Discuss [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Avri Doria

Sent: Sunday, June 28, 2015 9:01 PM

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Subject: Re: Draft comments to the AoC/Organisational review schedule public comment



Hi,



Just wanted to mention that I have been making some major changes on the draft James provided.  Some stuff that was not in there and some sstuff I disagreed with.



I was planning to send my own comments in and had thought to write that today.  Instead I did an edit on the group stuff.  I am ready, however, to submit my own comments if mine are too far off the NCSG-PC take.



I may do some more editing, but am pretty much done with my major comments for today..



avri





On 24-Jun-15 09:53, James Gannon wrote:

> Hi All,

>

> Please find my initial drafting for the public comment to the AOC and 

> Organisational review schedule that is coming to  close in the next 

> few days.

>

> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLCWNYombphjN5Pxob4IVEXNMjyuNim8YP

> UNCQVdx3g/edit?usp=sharing

>

> I welcome any comments or further input. 

>

> -James





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