Apart from a couple of very minor spelling errors (probably better
addressed by a native English speaker) I think it is an excellent
document. Well done, Yawri!

	Julf


On 12-12-2019 15:56, Yawri Carr Q wrote:
> Dear NCSG colleagues, 
> 
> I'm a volunteer for drafting the group's position regarding the Red
> Cross Implementation Plan public comment (available
> at:https://www.icann.org/public-comments/red-cross-names-implementation-2019-10-23-en).
> 
> I have read a lot of documentation regarding the Red Cross to understand
> the background. Thus, I wrote the draft based on previous NCSG
> positions, in order to be align with them. 
> 
> I'm a newcomer in the group and is also my first time doing a draft, as
> I did it by myself I would appreciate a lot to receive feedback coming
> from you. Especially on the last part, because is what the
> Implementation Plan is introducing, the rest are points already
> discussed in previous comments. 
> 
> You can access the draft on the following doc:
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XUTn3zd_0FLgwZxpHSDce6OUKw3oWLcNAISIo0zk6t0/edit?usp=sharing
> 
> Thank you all for any collaboration. 
> 
> Sincerely, 
> Yawri C.