I forward Kathy's wording.

On Wed, 28 Jun 2006, Mawaki Chango wrote:

> > Five: The GNSO Council will take the final report from the
> > WHOIS task
> > force that addresses all terms of reference, and the
> > definition of
> > purpose of collecting data derived from the dialogue with the
> > GAC and
> > SSAC, and consider improving the wording of the WHOIS service
> > definition
> > so that it is broadly understandable.

....replace "definition of purpose of collecting data..." and replace it
with:

"and the many uses and abuses of the collected data from the dialogue with
the Governments, law enforcement, data protection communities and SSAC,
and consider improving the wording of the Whois service.




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