Yes, a good start but with potentially unfortunate unintended consequences unless all of the elements raised; definition of terms, penalties, specifics for conference environments etc. are addressed. 

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From: "Wisdom Donkor" <[log in to unmask]>
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Subject: Re: Public Comments - Revisions to ICANN Expected Standards of Behaviors

+1 to Avri 

On Wednesday, June 1, 2016, Cheryl Langdon-Orr < [log in to unmask] > wrote: 
> I also agree with Avri on this matter... 
> 
> On 2 Jun 2016 6:49 am, "Tatiana Tropina" < [log in to unmask] > wrote: 
> 
> + 1 to Avri, 
> I think this is my problem with this public comment draft (and I left several comments about this in the doc). We do need more, but some of the issues require more time for elaboration. I don't think we can criticise ICANN for the fact that we haven't got more yet, when the document we are commenting on says that the work is in progress. 
> So agree with the positive comment that will say that it's good start but there is definitely an important work to be done further. 
> Cheers 
> Tanya 
> On 1 June 2016 at 19:24, avri doria < [log in to unmask] > wrote: 
>> 
>> On 31-May-16 15:58, Mueller, Milton L wrote: 
>> > From what I can read, I would not support the proposed policy. 
>> 
>> I find myself agreeing with the comment that we will eventually need 
>> something more. 
>> And I think that RFC7704 is a good model. 
>> 
>> But I think getting into that issue before we resolve wider 
>> accountability issues WS2 (e.g. ombudsman, or SOAC accountabity) of the 
>> CCWG-Accountabity is impracticable. I would suggest a statement that 
>> said good start, lets go with this for now, and determine after WS2, 
>> perhaps in next ATRT, whether more needs to be done. Some element of the 
>> issue could probably also feed into WS2 work. 
>> 
>> avri 
>> 
>> 
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