Is there any way to word it that would change your dissent, or is the objection generic? 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Rosenzweig [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
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> Cc: 'Schaefer, Brett'
> Subject: RE: CCWG comments last call
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> Milton/Colleagues
> 
> I think that the draft is quite fine and for the main I agree with it.
> Without in any way seeking to relitigate the issue, however, I know that the
> human rights language is one from which Heritage would dissent.  Is there
> some way of generically  making clear that the NCSG comments do not
> reflect the agreement of all NCSG members?
> 
> Paul
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mueller, Milton L [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: Friday, September 4, 2015 12:43 PM
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> Subject: CCWG comments last call
> 
> I have made some revisions. We seem to have rough consensus that we are
> opposed to the proposed voting allocations and consider them and two
> other
> things serious enough to raise doubts about whether the CCWG-
> Accountability
> proposal enhances ICANN's accountability. The comments now note that we
> are
> not unanimous on this but do have a preponderance of opinion that would
> constitute rough consensus. We all seem to be in agreement about our
> discussion of the so-called "freedom to contract" section and the section on
> advice from public authorities. We also now seem to have a way forward on
> how to handle the HR commitment, though that has only been floated a few
> minutes ago so it needs more review.
> 
> In reviewing these comments, please refrain from the temptation to
> introduce
> minor wordsmithing - we really don't have time for it at this point.
> 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGBXO5oOiN_FxivPFkHjz3Gc2w3AT2
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> Dr. Milton L Mueller
> Professor, School of Public Policy
> Georgia Institute of Technology