On Feb 19 17:33, Balleste, Roy ([log in to unmask]) wrote:

> Dear colleagues,
> 
> Please see the attached annex statement on privacy and data
> protection. I will appreciate suggestions, changes, modifications,
> etc.

It looks very good to me as it is. (I didn't even spot typos,
apart from one missing closing quotation mark.)

> The privacy-data protection sub group of the 'thick' Whois
> Working Group will meet again tomorrow. Tomorrow I will be
> submisting this Annex document as an individual (although I do not
> claim full credit for this document) pending endorsement by the NCUC

You have my endorsement at least. Good work.

-- 
Tapani Tarvainen