On Feb 11, 2011, at 3:02 PM, Avri Doria wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> Thanks for the edit pass. 
> 
> On 'civility' I expect we can come to any agreement.  As you said, it has such a broad meaning.
> 
> I took a quick look at the other comments, and some of your recommended changes seem like they would be substantive changes to the charter that was approved by a vote in the NCSG.  I have been very careful to not make substantive changes during this process.  I will read it more carefully this weekend.  I would think that I would need to have consensus in the EC for making any substantive changes on behalf of the NCSG.  I would like to see where the discussion goes on your proposals.    
> 
> But of course I will forward them to the SIC and Staff, with any comments that are generated on these lists.  And  I would expect you to offer them as a comments during the comment period. 
> 
> Best Regards,
> a.
> 
> 
> On 11 Feb 2011, at 14:31, Amber Sterling wrote:
> 
>> Hi,
>> 
>> Debbie and I reviewed the proposed NCSG charter together and our
>> edits/comments are attached.  Please let me know if you have any
>> questions.
>> 
>> Kind regards,
>> Amber
>> 
>> Amber Sterling
>> Senior Intellectual Property Specialist
>> Association of American Medical Colleges
>> 
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Avri Doria [mailto:[log in to unmask]] 
>> Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2011 3:44 PM
>> To: NCSG EC; NCSG Policy Committee
>> Subject: [ncsg-ec] my review of the staff's edit to our SG charter.
>> 
>> Hi,
>> 
>> Here is a summary of my comments.   I intend to send this to Sam Monday
>> morning.
>> 
>> In some cases these comments may not make sense without Sam's comment in
>> the text.  I guess sometimes they might not makes sense in any case.  
>> 
>> These comments can also be found in the document itself.
>> 
>> 
>> Comments:
>> 
>> Re 1.2.2 (c) Inclusion of civility
>> 
>> If necessary I am sure we will include the word 'civility'. Many of the
>> NCSG members, especially those in NCUC, see this particular requirement
>> for civility as being problematic in that it requires a value judgment
>> close to political correctness in order to make a judgment of what is
>> civil and what is not.  Especially in a multi-cultural organization
>> often one cultures directness is another cultures incivility. We also
>> believe that this criteria has been used improperly by the Ombudsman and
>> others in ICANN's past to limit freedom of expression.
>> 
>> 
>> Re 2.2.3 - definition of large and small organization
>> 
>> Personally I prefer the original NCSG definition and recommend that the
>> Constituency process includes this instead.  the problem with the
>> criterion here is that certain organization will be excluded from
>> membership based on not being large enough to be small.
>> 
>> 
>> a. Organizations that have more than 50 employees, or are membership
>> organizations with more than 500 individual members, shall be classified
>> as "large organizations".
>> 
>> b. Organizations that are composed of 10 or more organizational members
>> that qualify as "large" under criterion (a.) above shall be classified
>> as "large organizations".
>> 
>> c. Organizations that do not qualify as large organizations shall be
>> classified as "small organizations".
>> 
>> 
>> 2.2.8 Inactive Membership
>> 
>> While it is reasonable to include a sentence to indicate that members
>> can resign, i don't think we need to have names on the inactive list
>> times out.
>> 
>> Also, at this point we do not have dues.  We are considering the
>> introduction of voluntary contributions i the future, but at this point
>> membership in the NCSG is like membership in ISOC, no payment necessary.
>> 
>> 
>> 2.2.10  Sam had a question on outreach and coordination between
>> constituency Outreach and SG outreach.  recommended adding:
>> 
>> Membership outreach will be coordinated with Constituency outreach
>> efforts and any outreach efforts established by the GNSO or ICANN.
>> 
>> 2.4.2.1 Requirements for appeal and the question of whether there should
>> be weighted notion of bringing the case for consideration.
>> 
>> We thought about this and decided that while the voting threshold
>> includes the proportionality, the raising of the issue did not need to.
>> 
>> 2.4.3  Chair election  - changed the line to read:
>> 
>> A Chair can serve, at maximum, 2 full one year terms[SE1] consecutively.
>> There must be at least one intervening term before a member can be
>> elected again as chair;[AD2]
>> 
>> [SE1]For consideration:  Has there been discussion about when the terms
>> would begin/end?  That could be specified in here, but not required.
>> 
>> [AD2]not really.  Basically that gets defined on an election by
>> election basis.  I was criticized once for making the charter too long
>> by getting too much into detail.  This sort of thing does not seem to
>> really need codification, especially since creating a generic rule can
>> get confusing.  On the other hand, I think there was an ambiguity about
>> whether a chair could serve again in the future, so I added
>> clarification.
>> 
>> 
>> --
>> 
>> Anyone have something else to add?
>> 
>> Assuming the constituency process is approved, I think the changes Sam
>> made were mostly ok.  None of my comments is really big, except for
>> perhaps the one about big and small organizations that create an empty
>> spot for many of our small organization that are not big enough to be
>> small under the staff' definition.
>> 
>> thanks
>> 
>> a.
>> 
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