Thanks for the wordsmithing Joy, let's do it.

On Jun 7, 2012, at 1:51 AM, Joy Liddicoat wrote:

To insert after the word “fashion” the words “which does not violate freedom of expression, privacy and related rights” so it would read:
(to ensure that WHOIS data is accessible in an appropriately reliable, enforceable, and consistent fashion which does not violate freedom of expression, privacy and related rights)
Other ideas and suggestions would be welcome