+1, thanks David. Minor typo in last para, "explicit acknowledge[ment]..."

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Brenden Kuerbis
Internet Governance Project
http://internetgovernance.org


On Mon, Apr 22, 2013 at 8:21 AM, David Cake <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> This document has been out for public comment.
> http://www.icann.org/en/news/announcements/announcement-06mar13-en.htm
>
> I've missed the deadline on public comment for this by a day or two, but
> I'd still like to see if we can make a small comment on it if we can.
> Here is my draft comment - if NCSG could approve it (quickly), that would
> be great, otherwise I'll just put it in as a personal comment.
> Any additions or disagreement?
>
> Regards
> David
>
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> The regular update of the Security, Stability and Resiliency Framework is
> a very important part of ICANNs SSR function, as attested by its inclusion
> in the Affirmation of Commitments.
>
> NCSG notes the significant effort involved in preparing the FY13 Security,
> Stability and Resiliency Plan, and the progress towards implementing the
> recommendations of the Security, Stability and Resiliency Review Team
> Report.  While work so far has seen the completion of only some
> recommendations, we note planning and progress has been made for all the
> recommendations, and we appreciate the commitment to full implementation.
>
> NCSG supports the definition of ICANNs SSR role and remit. In particular,
> NCSG values the acknowledgement of areas that lie outside ICANNs remit, and
> NCSG strongly agrees that ICANNs role does not include law enforcement or
> determining what constitutes illicit conduct.
>
> NCSG welcomes the explicit acknowledge of the necessity of a continued
> multistakeholder approach to security, and notes the inclusion of civil
> society within all discussions of the Internet and security ecosystem, and
> particularly welcomes the inclusion of engagement with civil society on
> privacy and free expression issues as a commitment for FY14. ****
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