Thanks very much for this, David. I agree NCSG should support this statement. Thanks again, Robin On Apr 22, 2013, at 5:21 AM, David Cake wrote: > This document has been out for public comment. http:// > www.icann.org/en/news/announcements/announcement-06mar13-en.htm > > I've missed the deadline on public comment for this by a day or > two, but I'd still like to see if we can make a small comment on it > if we can. > Here is my draft comment - if NCSG could approve it (quickly), > that would be great, otherwise I'll just put it in as a personal > comment. > Any additions or disagreement? > > Regards > David > > ---------- > The regular update of the Security, Stability and Resiliency > Framework is a very important part of ICANNs SSR function, as > attested by its inclusion in the Affirmation of Commitments. > > NCSG notes the significant effort involved in preparing the FY13 > Security, Stability and Resiliency Plan, and the progress towards > implementing the recommendations of the Security, Stability and > Resiliency Review Team Report. While work so far has seen the > completion of only some recommendations, we note planning and > progress has been made for all the recommendations, and we > appreciate the commitment to full implementation. > > NCSG supports the definition of ICANNs SSR role and remit. In > particular, NCSG values the acknowledgement of areas that lie > outside ICANNs remit, and NCSG strongly agrees that ICANNs role > does not include law enforcement or determining what constitutes > illicit conduct. > > NCSG welcomes the explicit acknowledge of the necessity of a > continued multistakeholder approach to security, and notes the > inclusion of civil society within all discussions of the Internet > and security ecosystem, and particularly welcomes the inclusion of > engagement with civil society on privacy and free expression issues > as a commitment for FY14. > > > > > > IP JUSTICE Robin Gross, Executive Director 1192 Haight Street, San Francisco, CA 94117 USA p: +1-415-553-6261 f: +1-415-462-6451 w: http://www.ipjustice.org e: [log in to unmask]