Hi everyone,

Gabrielle and Niels from article19 worked on resolving the edits and
comments made in the draft.  Now we have an updated version of the comment
:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit

please review it and share your comments there.
we need to submit the comment *by 30th May*.

Best Regards,

Rafik

ps as background for this public comment please check here
https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en