Hi everyone,

Gabrielle and Niels from article19 worked on resolving the edits and comments made in the draft.  Now we have an updated version of the comment : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit

please review it and share your comments there.

we need to submit the comment by 30th May.

Best Regards,

Rafik

ps as background for this public comment please check here https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en