we meet again Monday. there is a drive to finalize at that meeting so that if can be on the agenda for the next GNSO mtg. -------- Original Message -------- Subject: [Accountability-dt] Charter for Circulation Date: Fri, 31 Oct 2014 17:15:10 +0000 From: Grace Abuhamad <[log in to unmask]> To: [log in to unmask] <[log in to unmask]> Hi all, Here attached are the redline and clean versions of the charter incorporating comments from Bart, Matthew, and Izumi. Izumi ? I think your main concern (if I read your edits correctly) was keeping the line about the mailing list. That line is still in the charter, but I had moved it down one paragraph in the last draft iteration to include it with other tools for the CCWG. Main changes: * Accepted all of Bart's and Matthew's edits * Per Matthew's comment about clarity between the two cross community groups, I changed CCWG to "CCWG-Accountability" and CWG to "CWG-Stewardship" in the whole text * Per Matthew's comment about "other groups'" I included a link to the ICG RFP and wrote out who those łother groups˛ are (the numbers and protocol parameters communities) Some comments were unanswered, so I have copied them below for discussion on the list. They are in the redline, but I made the clean version "really clean" so that it's easy to circulate to your communities. * (Grace) referring to the stakeholder definition: Should we include a citation? The definition text seems to be in a pay-only document. http://www.efqm.org/understanding-an-organisations-stakeholders * Action: Keith to provide questions asap no later then Monday Talk to you on Monday, Grace