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> 
> I was looking for comment from folks other than those of us who are
> responsible for the content of the proposal.

Then you are going to be looking for a long time. 
I welcome comments from anyone in NCSG, but realistically the people who are actively following or working with the CWG are the only ones who can be expected to be have a developed position.
Other NCSG members can and should review critically what we write, but sitting there waiting for random people to take the lead is unrealistic.

--MM