Hi, Just wanted to mention that I have been making some major changes on the draft James provided. Some stuff that was not in there and some sstuff I disagreed with. I was planning to send my own comments in and had thought to write that today. Instead I did an edit on the group stuff. I am ready, however, to submit my own comments if mine are too far off the NCSG-PC take. I may do some more editing, but am pretty much done with my major comments for today.. avri On 24-Jun-15 09:53, James Gannon wrote: > Hi All, > > Please find my initial drafting for the public comment to the AOC and > Organisational review schedule that is coming to close in the next > few days. > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLCWNYombphjN5Pxob4IVEXNMjyuNim8YPUNCQVdx3g/edit?usp=sharing > > I welcome any comments or further input. > > -James --- This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. https://www.avast.com/antivirus