Hi Matt, there is a document created here https://docs.google.com/document/d/14wO_tu-liqEqzlMSm_NnGD4_BME7f7Fhg_Z7d1lwYBc/edit but thee is no pen holder to manage the comment. still looking for a volunteer. Best, Rafik 2015-08-24 17:03 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <[log in to unmask]>: > Hi all > > I may have missed it but is anyone compiling comments on the ICG > proposal? And if so could they point to the doc. > > Thanks. > > Matthew > > > On 8/24/2015 12:53 AM, Rafik Dammak wrote: > > Hi, > > thanks Milton for taking the lead for the drafting. I see that the comment > is starting to get shape and several folks are putting comments. > again it is important that everyone try to go through the CCWG report > (which can be found here > <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en%29and> > https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en)and > try to share his/her thoughts. the document is on "comment-mode" which > makes the work more easily and keep trace of the discussion > > Best, > > Rafik > > 2015-08-24 1:45 GMT+09:00 Mueller, Milton L < > [log in to unmask]>: > >> I have incorporated some very helpful comments from Matt, Tamir, and >> Brenden, in a way that I think should have some agreement among at least >> the people who have been working on it. >> >> Other members are welcome to take a look and flag any issues. >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGBXO5oOiN_FxivPFkHjz3Gc2w3AT2PeJznrXPw2fJ4/edit >> >> >> >> >> Dr. Milton L. Mueller >> >> Professor, School of Public Policy >> >> Georgia Institute of Technology >> >> >> >> >> > > > -- > Matthew Shears > Global Internet Policy and Human Rights > Center for Democracy & Technology (CDT)+ 44 (0)771 247 2987 > >