[log in to unmask]" type="cite">Hi,
thanks Milton for taking the lead for the drafting. I see that the comment is starting to get shape and several folks are putting comments.again it is important that everyone try to go through the CCWG report (which can be found here https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en)and try to share his/her thoughts. the document is on "comment-mode" which makes the work more easily and keep trace of the discussion
Best,
Rafik
2015-08-24 1:45 GMT+09:00 Mueller, Milton L <[log in to unmask]>:
I have incorporated some very helpful comments from Matt, Tamir, and Brenden, in a way that I think should have some agreement among at least the people who have been working on it.
Other members are welcome to take a look and flag any issues.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGBXO5oOiN_FxivPFkHjz3Gc2w3AT2PeJznrXPw2fJ4/edit
Dr. Milton L. Mueller
Professor, School of Public Policy
Georgia Institute of Technology
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