Hi Matt,

there is a document created here https://docs.google.com/document/d/14wO_tu-liqEqzlMSm_NnGD4_BME7f7Fhg_Z7d1lwYBc/edit
but thee is no pen holder to manage the comment.
still looking for a volunteer. 

Best,

Rafik

2015-08-24 17:03 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <[log in to unmask]>:
Hi all

I may have missed it but is anyone compiling comments on the ICG proposal?  And if so could they point to the doc.

Thanks.

Matthew


On 8/24/2015 12:53 AM, Rafik Dammak wrote:
Hi,

thanks Milton for taking the lead for the drafting. I see that the comment is starting to get shape and several folks are putting comments.
again it is important that everyone try to go through the CCWG report (which can be found here https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en)and try to share his/her thoughts. the document is on "comment-mode" which makes the work more easily and keep trace of the discussion

Best,

Rafik

2015-08-24 1:45 GMT+09:00 Mueller, Milton L <[log in to unmask]>:

I have incorporated some very helpful comments from Matt, Tamir, and Brenden, in a way that I think should have some agreement among at least the people who have been working on it.

Other members are welcome to take a look and flag any issues.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGBXO5oOiN_FxivPFkHjz3Gc2w3AT2PeJznrXPw2fJ4/edit  

 

Dr. Milton L. Mueller

Professor, School of Public Policy

Georgia Institute of Technology

 

 



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