I had started working on some text for this (I think Amr might have aswell?) but Im not sure if I will finish it in time. I added it into the bottom of your doc Avri in case its of use to the NCSG comments. -James > On 26 Aug 2015, at 16:18, Avri Doria <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > Hi, > > Sept 6 is the deadline for comments on the Preliminary issues report . > As I mentioned earlier, I have created a drive doc that includes my one > comment on this issue. > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lGzq-cEDkdRstgh6w930Vhb-TeQGkhH2wrNrs36kt4s/edit?usp=sharing > > It is open for comment and for the suggested addition of other issues. > > I plan to ask the NCSG Policy committee to approve this document as a > NCSG comment before the deadline. > > Thanks > > avri > > --- > This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. > https://www.avast.com/antivirus