Hi @Bolutife Adisa <[log in to unmask]>

Thanks for the work on this. Just wondering if you saw Kathy's additional
comments on the draft and whether you're in a position to address them
before the Monday 27th deadline?
Can other members with knowledge on this topic also take a look please?

Warmly,
Tomslin



On Tue, 14 Nov 2023 at 06:40, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> As promised on the call earlier, here is the link to the NCSG draft
> comment that Bolu is leading
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hxiw_roMyfKOKd200KiUfQSR8ODgLIuNujsmeT_yDqc/edit?usp=sharing
>
> Warmly,
> Tomslin
>
>
> On Thu, 5 Oct 2023 at 21:28, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> The ICANN Board is seeking the community input on the proposed Pilot
>> Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference. This is a review of
>> interest to NCSG, so it would be great to have members volunteer to draft a
>> comment for our SG.
>>
>> The public comment is due on 27 November 2023, so if you'd like to
>> volunteer,  please reach out.
>>
>> More information on the comment can be found from the below link:
>>
>> https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/pilot-holistic-review-revised-terms-of-reference-tor-28-09-2023
>>
>> Warmly,
>> Tomslin
>>
>