Hi @Bolutife Adisa <[log in to unmask]> Thanks for the work on this. Just wondering if you saw Kathy's additional comments on the draft and whether you're in a position to address them before the Monday 27th deadline? Can other members with knowledge on this topic also take a look please? Warmly, Tomslin On Tue, 14 Nov 2023 at 06:40, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Hi all, > > As promised on the call earlier, here is the link to the NCSG draft > comment that Bolu is leading > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hxiw_roMyfKOKd200KiUfQSR8ODgLIuNujsmeT_yDqc/edit?usp=sharing > > Warmly, > Tomslin > > > On Thu, 5 Oct 2023 at 21:28, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]> > wrote: > >> Dear all, >> >> The ICANN Board is seeking the community input on the proposed Pilot >> Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference. This is a review of >> interest to NCSG, so it would be great to have members volunteer to draft a >> comment for our SG. >> >> The public comment is due on 27 November 2023, so if you'd like to >> volunteer, please reach out. >> >> More information on the comment can be found from the below link: >> >> https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/pilot-holistic-review-revised-terms-of-reference-tor-28-09-2023 >> >> Warmly, >> Tomslin >> >