Hi @Bolutife Adisa 

Thanks for the work on this. Just wondering if you saw Kathy's additional comments on the draft and whether you're in a position to address them before the Monday 27th deadline?

Can other members with knowledge on this topic also take a look please?

Warmly,

Tomslin

On Tue, 14 Nov 2023 at 06:40, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

Hi all,

As promised on the call earlier, here is the link to the NCSG draft comment that Bolu is leading https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hxiw_roMyfKOKd200KiUfQSR8ODgLIuNujsmeT_yDqc/edit?usp=sharing

Warmly,

Tomslin

On Thu, 5 Oct 2023 at 21:28, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

Dear all,

The ICANN Board is seeking the community input on the proposed Pilot Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference. This is a review of interest to NCSG, so it would be great to have members volunteer to draft a comment for our SG. 

The public comment is due on 27 November 2023, so if you'd like to volunteer,  please reach out.

More information on the comment can be found from the below link:

https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/pilot-holistic-review-revised-terms-of-reference-tor-28-09-2023

Warmly,
Tomslin