I had started working on some text for this (I think Amr might have aswell?) but Im not sure if I will finish it in time.
I added it into the bottom of your doc Avri in case its of use to the NCSG comments.


-James

> On 26 Aug 2015, at 16:18, Avri Doria <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Sept 6 is the deadline for comments on the Preliminary issues report . 
> As I mentioned earlier, I have created a drive doc that includes my one
> comment on this issue.
> 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lGzq-cEDkdRstgh6w930Vhb-TeQGkhH2wrNrs36kt4s/edit?usp=sharing
> 
> It is open for comment and for the suggested addition of other issues.
> 
> I plan to ask the NCSG Policy committee to approve this document as a
> NCSG comment before the deadline.
> 
> Thanks
> 
> avri
> 
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