Dear Farzi, I hope all is well with you! I have reviewed the document, and would like to congratulate you and/or the team that worked on it for a job well done! The write up is perfect. I wasn't able to add anything major. Instead, I proof read and corrected minor spacing errors. I have suggested the changes I made for your kind acceptance. Warmest regards, On Thu, Jul 28, 2016 at 6:47 PM, Ayden Férdeline <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Thanks for your work on this, Farzi. > > It would be great to see an NCSG submission on this important issue. I > have left a few comments in the Google Doc and also responded to the > consultation in my personal capacity several weeks ago. In my view the > proposed changes to the fellowship programme by DPRD are excellent. > > Best wishes, > > Ayden > > > > On Thu, Jul 28, 2016 6:21 PM, farzaneh badii [log in to unmask] > wrote: > >> Dear all, >> >> Rafik had asked me to draft a public comment for the fellowship program >> at ICANN. I got to it really late and the deadline is tomorrow (29 July, >> 23.59 UTC) >> >> If you get the chance to comment on it until tomorrow and we get the >> approval of PC ( sorry PC I know it's late) then great. If not, I either >> submit it as an individual public comment or if you want to endorse it I >> can add your name too. >> >> Here is the link to the google doc ( if you cannot access google doc let >> me know I will send you by other means) >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YTb2LNewY_Amgo6dzxZ-DkRZrhRezOe4DwVYifhEu6g/edit?usp=sharing >> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YTb2LNewY_Amgo6dzxZ-DkRZrhRezOe4DwVYifhEu6g/edit?usp=sharing> >> >> >> Link to call for public comment: >> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/fellowship-application-process-review-2016-06-14-en >> >> >> Here is the link to projected improvements >> >> >> https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/fellowship-projected-fy17-improvements-14jun16-en.pdf >> >> >> >> >> <https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/fellowship-projected-fy17-improvements-14jun16-en.pdf> >> Best >> >> -- >> Farzaneh >> > > > Ayden Férdeline > Statement of Interest > <https://community.icann.org/display/gnsosoi/Ayden+Férdeline+SOI> > -- Best Regards, [image: --] Kawsu Sillah [image: https://]about.me/ksillah <https://about.me/ksillah?promo=email_sig> AMBASSADOR <https://ideas.itu.int/page/view/933> ITU Telecom World Young Innovators Competition. Mobile : +220 9865300 | 6865300 | 3965300 Skype: profkawsu | Facebook: Kawsu.f.Sillah <https://www.facebook.com/kawsu.f.sillah> Twitter: @ksillah1 | LinkedIn: KAWSU SILLAH <https://www.linkedin.com/profile/view?id=103784437&trk=nav_responsive_tab_profile_pic>
