Thank you, Ed, for submitting this thoughtful and fact-filled comment to ICANN on improving accountability within the org.  It will be a real test for ICANN to see how it handles comments with messages contrary to the staff plan.  Thank you for doing this difficult and too-often thankless work!

Best,
Robin


On Jun 29, 2014, at 12:35 PM, Seun Ojedeji wrote:

> Hi Edward,
> 
> Thanks for this master piece. It's very useful not just because you clearly enumerated the problems[1] but you also proffered solutions while making references to contributions from others.
> 
> The document generally exceeds the NCSG in terms of view; as it captures views from other stakeholders. I really think the coordination group could use this document as a working document to producing the actual proposal.
> 
> Thanks again.
> 
> Cheers!
> 1. With historical mentions that is educating.
> sent from Google nexus 4
> kindly excuse brevity and typos.
> 
> On 28 Jun 2014 01:33, "Edward Morris" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Hi everybody,
>  
> I've been spending a lot of time in places where the internet isn't freely available. I appreciate a lot more the stories Norbert has shared with us over the years. Access remains a major problem in many parts of the world.
>  
> I've just submitted a comment at the very end of the Enhancing Accountability reply period. I note the great work done by so many here on the issue, particularly Robin and Avri. We all have a bit of a different take on things but any movement towards accountability and transparency is most welcome. 
>  
> My submission is attached. Comments / questions / criticisms are all welcome.
>  
> Kind Regards,
>  
> Ed Morris