Thanks Milton, this works.

Best,
Tamir

On 9/8/2015 11:53 AM, Marilia Maciel wrote:
> Thank you very much for the elegant solution, Milton. Although I
> preferred the previous version, I can also support the current one and
> the document. 
> Best wishes,
> Marília
>
> On Tue, Sep 8, 2015 at 12:49 PM, Sam Lanfranco <[log in to unmask]
> <mailto:[log in to unmask]>> wrote:
>
>     I too endorse the language as it now reads.
>
>     Sam L.
>
>     Quoting "Mueller, Milton L" <[log in to unmask]
>     <mailto:[log in to unmask]>>:
>
>     > OK, I have made some minor modifications based on these
>     > discussions, the only significant one related to human rights. The
>     > new language reads:
>     >
>     > The CCWG solicits comments on two different ways of formulating
>     > ICANN's commitment to human rights. Option one expressed ICANN's
>     > commitment "to respect the fundamental human rights of the exercise
>     > of free expression and the free flow of information." Option 2
>     > expressed ICANN's commitment more broadly, "Within its mission and
>     > in its operations, ICANN will be committed to respect
>     > internationally recognized fundamental human rights."
>     >
>     > With one member organization exception, NCSG tends toward support
>     > for the second, more general formulation. The first formulation is
>     > too limited because other human rights, such as privacy, are
>     > relevant to ICANN policies. We do, however, recognize that a
>     > generic reference to human rights might not work as effectively as
>     > more specific requirements, and that freedom of expression and
>     > privacy are two human rights most directly relevant to ICANN's
>     > policy activity. Our preference, therefore, would be to formulate
>     > the commitment this way:
>     >
>     > "Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed
>     > to respect internationally recognized fundamental human rights, in
>     > particular freedom of expression and privacy."
>     >
>     > I hope the policy committee can approve the whole document and get
>     > it submitted to the CCWG public comment period tomorrow.
>     >
>     > --MM
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