Hi everyone, Gabrielle and Niels from article19 worked on resolving the edits and comments made in the draft. Now we have an updated version of the comment : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit please review it and share your comments there. we need to submit the comment *by 30th May*. Best Regards, Rafik ps as background for this public comment please check here https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en