Hi Matt,

there is a document created here
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14wO_tu-liqEqzlMSm_NnGD4_BME7f7Fhg_Z7d1lwYBc/edit
but thee is no pen holder to manage the comment.
still looking for a volunteer.

Best,

Rafik

2015-08-24 17:03 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <[log in to unmask]>:

> Hi all
>
> I may have missed it but is anyone compiling comments on the ICG
> proposal?  And if so could they point to the doc.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Matthew
>
>
> On 8/24/2015 12:53 AM, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> thanks Milton for taking the lead for the drafting. I see that the comment
> is starting to get shape and several folks are putting comments.
> again it is important that everyone try to go through the CCWG report
> (which can be found here
> <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en%29and>
> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-2015-08-03-en)and
> try to share his/her thoughts. the document is on "comment-mode" which
> makes the work more easily and keep trace of the discussion
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> 2015-08-24 1:45 GMT+09:00 Mueller, Milton L <
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>
>> I have incorporated some very helpful comments from Matt, Tamir, and
>> Brenden, in a way that I think should have some agreement among at least
>> the people who have been working on it.
>>
>> Other members are welcome to take a look and flag any issues.
>>
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JGBXO5oOiN_FxivPFkHjz3Gc2w3AT2PeJznrXPw2fJ4/edit
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>>
>> Dr. Milton L. Mueller
>>
>> Professor, School of Public Policy
>>
>> Georgia Institute of Technology
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